Jen
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Post by Jen on Dec 24, 2007 1:14:34 GMT
This will be finished very soon, right now the prolouge is in progress:
Plot:
This fanfiction takes place in the year 1997, after Grams died and when Phoebe moved to New York...there's a twist though, Patricia (their mother) made Paige move in the manor when she was a baby so they all grew up together, now they aren't 'Charmed' and without Grams they are hopeless to survive the demons and warlocks that will try and attack the future Charmed Ones.
Characters:
Prue Halliwell Piper Halliwell Phoebe Halliwell Paige Halliwell Andy Trudeau Darryl Morris Leo Wyatt
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Post by Jen on Dec 24, 2007 18:38:27 GMT
Prolouge:
Paige ran down the street as fast as she could, her heart racing like never before. She ran and found a hiding spot, and peeked around the corner to see if he--no it, was still there. "Come out come out where ever you are" The demon played the words on his tongue as if he was teasing her, which he was. Tears of fear lept down her face, it was Christmas, and she was going to die. She hoped she could see her sisters again, to say goodbye. It was all her fault, it was all Phoebe's fault that this happened, if Phoebe would have come over she wouldn't be in this situation. The demon closed his eyes and muttered a few words under his breath. He smiled as he crept over to her. Paige screamed. "HELP!" She yelled, as he threw an energy ball at her, a man swooped in to save her. He dove over her, pushing the both of them to the ground. "Come on." He said, grabbing her hand and orbing out.
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Post by Jen on Dec 24, 2007 19:26:25 GMT
Chapter 1
Prue was jogging down the street one fresh morning, and her little sister, Paige, was chasing after her. "Prue! Prue!" Paige exclaimed, trying her best to get Prue's attention. Prue turned, after hearing her name being called. She smiled brightly after seeing Paige. "Hey there Princess." Prue said brightly, approaching Paige. "Don't call me that, I'm not three." Paige pouted. She hated Prue's babyish nicknames for her. They were either 'Princess', 'PrincessPaige', or 'Paigey Poo'.
Prue rolled her eyes. "What are you doing here?" She asked her sister, changing the nickname subject. Paige gave a smirk. "You forgot your lunch." Paige said, handing Prue a bag.
Prue gave her sister a strange look. "Lunch? I'm out jogging, on Saturday." Prue said, wondering what kinda kick Paige was on this time. "Well, look inside, I thought you might like something." Paige told Prue, who was looking concerned about something.
Paige noticed. "What's up?" She asked, being inturrupted by Piper walking up to the duo. "What's up?" Piper asked, repeating Paige's question.
Prue let out a sigh. "It's just--" She cut herself off, thinking of how she would explain her feelings. "It's just that you guys are all grown up now, and it's Christmas and Phoebe can't come home, and it's just so hard." Prue said, she was just so sad that her sisters were grown up and they weren't in need of her any longer.
Paige and Piper smiled. Paige wrapped her arms around her older sister. "It's okay Prue, we still need you." She said, hugging Prue. Prue hugged back with a smile forming on her face too.
Piper hugged them too. "Yeah. We'll always need you." She said, hugging them. They pulled away from each other, and Prue continued jogging down the street, carrying her lunch.
Piper walked back to the manor with Paige, but she had to be at Quake right now, so Paige was once again left alone in the manor. Piper jumped in the car and left. Paige had a job as an assistant at Social Services, but it was Saturday, the day to relax and pamper.
Paige layed down on the couch and decided that it was boring being alone on Christmas Eve. She picked up the phone and clicked speed dial. She pressed 'Phoebe'. Phoebe picked up.
Phoebe: Hello?
Paige: Phoebe! Hi, um, I was wondering..
Phoebe: If I'd reconsider coming over for Christmas.
Paige: Yeah.
Phoebe: No, sorry Paige, but I'm a big girl now, I'm having dinner with Jack and his family.
Paige: Jack? Who's Jack?
Phoebe: Oh, just some guy I met at a bar last week.
Paige: Oh, I get it, you'd rather eat Christmas dinner with a guy you met at a bar than your family.
Phoebe: Yeah, because my family thinks of me as a disgrace.
Paige: A disgrace? No we don't.
Phoebe: Of course you do, just because I'm different.
Paige: Phoebe..
Phoebe: Bye.
Phoebe hung up, just as the doorbell rang in her apartment. A man arrived at the door. "Phoebe? It's me, it's Ian." The man said. Phoebe rushed to the door. "Hey Ian." She said, leaning over to give him a kiss on his cheek.
"Hey Phoebe, so, where are we gonna have dinner tommorow?" Ian asked. "Oh, I figured I could beg my sisters to reschedule, but they got all 'Family comes first' so I've got to go." Phoebe said, grabbing her purse and jacket, she pushed Ian out of the apartment along with herself, she locked the door and waved 'bye'.
Paige lay on the couch watching TV, she was angry at her sister, no she wasn't angry at Phoebe, she was pissed. She sat up and sighed. She had to tell Prue and Piper about this.
She got her coat and slipped it on, she locked the doors and headed for Quake.
She took the shortcut, which was slipping behind an alley. As she arrived at the alley, she heard a scream. Her instincts told her to run to it, so she did.
She screamed, as she saw a demon burning her alive. He caught eye of her, a future charmed one. He left his original victim, and chased after Paige.
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Post by Jen on Dec 24, 2007 19:45:22 GMT
Chapter 2
Paige ran down the street as fast as she could, her heart racing like never before. She ran and found a hiding spot, and peeked around the corner to see if he--no it, was still there.
"Come out come out where ever you are" The demon played the words on his tongue as if he was teasing her, which he was. Tears of fear lept down her face, it was Christmas, and she was going to die. She hoped she could see her sisters again, to say goodbye.
It was all her fault, it was all Phoebe's fault that this happened, if Phoebe would have come over she wouldn't be in this situation. The demon closed his eyes and muttered a few words under his breath. He smiled as he crept over to her. Paige screamed.
"HELP!" She yelled, as he threw an energy ball at her, a man swooped in to save her. He dove over her, pushing the both of them to the ground. "Come on." He said, grabbing her hand and orbing out.
They arrived at the manor. Paige was trembling with fear. "What just happened?" She asked him. "You will know in time." The man said, sprinkling memory dust over her. Paige shook her head. "Who are you?" She asked him, forgetting everything. "My name is Leo, and I just--gotta go." He said, walking over to the door and rushing outside.
"Wow that guy was strange." Paige told herself. A cat sat outside her window, and Paige squinted to look at her collar. "Hm. Strange symbol." She walked outside to where it was sunny a minute ago, and now it was pouring rain.
She made a kissing nose to the cat, and she came running over to Paige. "That's a good kitty." Paige said, bending down to reach the collar. The symbol was strange, but that was besides the point.
The cat's fur was all natted and wet, Paige scooped up the cat and brought her inside. "Oh kitty, you need a new hairdo." Paige told the cat, as she sat her on the couch and tried to unnat the cat's wet hair with her fingers.
Phoebe knocked on the door of the manor. She hoped someone was home. Paige ran to the door, and for some weird reason the cat followed.
Paige felt that she should ask who it was before opening the door. "Who's there?" Paige asked. "Paige?" Phoebe asked. Paige opened the door and rolled her eyes. "I thought you weren't coming." She told Phoebe, who carried one of those fruit cakes you buy at the grocery store that look like you actually made it.
"I felt I had to, to keep your love for me." Phoebe said to Paige giving her a hug. Paige closed her eyes as she hugged back. "I'll always love you." She said, hugging harder. "Right..." Paige heard Phoebe say in a demony voice. Paige pulled away, and she screamed looking at her sister who looked exactly like a demon.
Paige closed her eyes, then opened them. "Phoebe?" She asked. Phoebe gasped, running over to Paige. "You alright honey?" She asked her. "Oh I'm fine I guess." Paige replied.
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Post by Jamie on Dec 24, 2007 23:02:48 GMT
That's really good, well done! Just one thing, wouldn't Paige be called Paige Halliwell if she grew up there as a baby lol? Because she wouldn't have had her foster parents
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Jen
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Post by Jen on Dec 24, 2007 23:43:42 GMT
Yeah... Thanks, I was waiting for someone to comment, Chapter 3 is coming up. I'm gonna make a promo for this.
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Post by Jen on Dec 24, 2007 23:54:51 GMT
Chapter 3Phoebe gave a concerned look. "Well you don't look okay hon, what happened?" She asked. Paige shuddered at the coldness in the room. "I just..saw something." Paige said, keeping her lips tight. "Something like?" Phoebe asked, wanting to get farther into the subject. "Pheebs, it's none of your buisness." Said Prue, who walked in the door with Piper. "Prue! Piper, how are you?" Phoebe asked, standing up to face her older sisters. She kept a tight lipped smile, not wanting to share what just happened. She knew Paige loved her, but Prue and Piper thought of her as the family disgrace. "I got fruitcake!" Phoebe said, raising her bag. She tried her best to change the subject. Suddently, some kinda demon beast swung through the attic door and ran down the stairs to face the sisters. When he saw them, he saw potential power, and lots of it. He knew what he was getting into and he didnt want to die. He dropped a book, and shimmered out. Piper rushed over to the book and grabbed it. "The Book of Shadows." She said, reading the title. Her sisters ran over to her. {In progress } OCC: Can't finish, my hand hurts
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Post by Jen on Dec 27, 2007 23:46:06 GMT
Chapter 3 Continuation
Paige grabbed the book in her hands. "The cat!" She yelled out, rushing over to the cat and matching the symbols. Prue gave her young sister a look. "Where did you find her?" She asked, hoping for a straight answer.
"Outside, on the porch." Paige answered. Phoebe crinkled her nose. "I think I saw that cat pee outside my apartment last week." She blurted out. Piper's eyes grew as she noticed where she and Prue saw the cat from. "Me and Prue saw her when we were driving home tonight." She told them.
Paige was a scared, of what that guy did, of what this meant, and also of what happened with Phoebe. Everything was so strange and unfamiliar now.
Prue opened the book. She saw a spell or something. She was about to speak when someone transported in a flash of bright light.
The sisters gasped. "This is not supposed to happen." The woman said, scooping the book up from Prue's hands. "You will learn of this in time, but now, you have to forget." She pulled memory dust just like Leo had out of her pocket and sprinkled it on their heads. She disappeared and they forgot what they were doing.
"What was I saying?" Prue asked.
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